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Naomi No More: Part 1
"Sorry if I took a little longer to finish up back there."
"Hey, it's not every day a guy gets to see his girlfriend wolf down five big bowls of pasta like that."
"Had to prove a point to that waiter. 'The all-you-can eat deal probably isn't the best for you.' Yeah right!"
"Well, you certainly showed him."
"I know right? Bet a badass like me doesn't walk into that restaurant all that often."
"Y-Yeah."
"Still, it was pretty sweet to hear I've got the new record. And I wasn't even really tying to carbo load!"
"...Alex?"
"Yeah?"
"I was sort of hoping we could talk."
"Aren't we doing that right now?"
"I mean, talk about you."
"Oh? Wer
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Naomi No More: Part 2
Two Weeks Later
"Leave it to Jessica to just call me out of the blue like this. Knowing her I thought she'd be scrambling to get things ready for the start of the semester. But apparently she wants to hang out instead. Typical Jessi."
"Well, whatever. It's not like I had plans today. I'm sure whatever she has in mind will be fun."
"Hey Jessica, the door was open so I let myself-"
"We need to talk."
"Hey, Jessi, let go! Eric? Jesse? What are you guys doing here?"
"Well I do live here..."
"Alex we need to deal with this Naomi thing today."
"So that's what this is about..."
"Alex-"
"Sammi, get in position now!"
"R-Right!"
"Jessica, l
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Bimbo Academy (1/11)
Nana : The inflation rate has increased significantly these days.... how can I fully support my growing daughter with this phase?
Fifi : What's the matter, director? Your face looks so dark...
Nana : Nah.. It's just bills and taxes. Nothing serious.
Fifi : Well, Fifi came here to give director some nice idea and stuff..
Nana : Hmmm.. let me hear it.
Fifi : Okies! So like, first make couple of girls come here for free and have them spread our academy's sexiness by making them tell their friends! "giggle"
Nana : First two girls as a bait and use them to lure other girls?
Fifi : Yippie! Director is soooo smart and stuff! right! then you
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This is the second part of Feline Fever, the Classroom. I hope you all enjoyed it!
This one was a tad difficult to write. I'll admit, it probably didn't come out perfectly. I had a lot of trouble switching "voices" between the two, although I really enjoyed writing the part at the end.
I know some of you might be disappointed this one was just "boring" character development...but the next parts might interest you then.
I hope you all enjoy the rest of the story.
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This one was a tad difficult to write. I'll admit, it probably didn't come out perfectly. I had a lot of trouble switching "voices" between the two, although I really enjoyed writing the part at the end.
I know some of you might be disappointed this one was just "boring" character development...but the next parts might interest you then.
I hope you all enjoy the rest of the story.
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Your writing is quite good but.... if I might make a suggestion about the pictures, it's kind of awkward? Unnatural? That they're all standing side by side at the same level, staring at the "camera", like they're just figures on display, rather than actual people doing actual things. It's kind of like I'm in the middle of a japanese game. Can't they ever be facing any other directions, or actually doing anything?